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in the silence

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i like this one =)
manipulations are so far my favoire thing to do on photoshop
took me a few hours

credit:
sky: [link]
field: [link]
girl: [link]
piano:[link]

all brushes from [link]

:love: :blowkiss: :thanks:
thanks to all!
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Hello, firstly let me start by saying I like this piece and what you are trying to portray of what I interpret as an unsettling calm, surreal but beautiful all at the same time.

There are a couple of things I would advise you to watch out for in the future, these are shadows and the proportional scales of objects in relation to each other.

Shadows - you've done well to get rid of the reflections that were present on the piano but I noticed that you've masked out every shadow portion that is underneath the girl, if you would have left that in it would 'settle' her into the photo more, nothing exists in this world that has a light source on it without a shadow too. You made a good choice with this stock as the light source in the stock matches quite closely with the moon light source. I'd still check to put rim light edges down her left arm and left leg as the source of light is coming from behind and not so much to the side.

Scale - the average human can lay across a piano, even a grand piano and have their heads and feet touch the top and bottom. While I understand that some women are petite the scale of this girl on the piano is slightly too small. I get that you want all of her on there but I think that you were to scale her up so that the magazine / book were to hang slightly over the edge of the top that it would look even more believable.

Final tips would be to watch the horizon line blending, specifically for the sky in this instance. Check the shadows on the piano as it is showing that lighting is coming from the front, which is fine if it is, but make the girls shadows and lights match. To make proportional scales match, look into using perspectives and warp free transform tools in photoshop.

Final commendation, I like the masking of the wheat stalks to make the piano 'sit' within the field, it places it well.
Nice work.
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